Editing and Having Fun (Part Three)

Alex looks at his story and decides what kind of sin would make a shamed Mac head out in a lightning storm, wearing steel suspenders to hold up his kilt.

Harry Hogg
4 min readFeb 21, 2024
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Recall: At the time Mac had lifted his kilt for a private act at the base of a tree during a storm, he was incinerated by one of God’s lasers. Before Mac became ashes, he was keeping some secrets; one such was hiding from his friends his daughter’s pregnancy…but why? Read on this slapstick comedy of grammar problems in life and death.

Part 3:

Digging graves for dead pigs was not PN’s idea of a glamorous life. When Mac had adopted the hopeless kid, PN had never seen a pig. He and his wife, Ellipsis, had adopted a daughter, Notta Adjective, to help around the…

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Harry Hogg

Ex Greenpeace, writing since a teenager. Will be writing ‘Lori Tales’ exclusively for JK Talla Publishing in the Spring of 2025